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    Looking great Josiah. Colors and lines look good and the land texture is very good. Look forward to seeing the end result.

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    Great map! I love the last additions. The mini-maps are excellents and very useful.

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    Quote Originally Posted by arsheesh View Post
    Looking great Josiah. Colors and lines look good and the land texture is very good. Look forward to seeing the end result.

    Cheers,
    -Arsheesh
    Quote Originally Posted by Ilanthar View Post
    Great map! I love the last additions. The mini-maps are excellents and very useful.
    Thanks Arsheesh and Ilanthar!


    So I believe this is the final product (for the composite map).. maybe.. possibly. I can't think of anything else at this point. Anything to point out? I added a gorge thing in the north, to add a bit more personality to the Mangrath Plateau. What do you think of it?

    (EDIT: Forgot latest wip)


    ### LATEST WIP ###
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    Looks really nice Josiah!

    I like the gorge, though I don't particularly like the label for it, but then again it may not look right to the side of it. Perhaps if you spread out the gorge a little bit more, as it does look a little isolated, it would fit in a bit better!

    The only other thing is that you've cropped off some of your labels that would normally overlap the edge, which you may want to put back. Otherwise, everything is little pretty darn good I think!

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    Attention J Edward! I've made a icon for my map, with the very ironic phrase on the scroll "United as One" because my lands are as far as you can get from united as one. They made the saying when the Gondevash Empire was first forming, okay. They thought they could conquer all the lands and keep them under control, they were very wrong.

    (EDIT: Just noticed some of the shading went off the shield so I quickly fixed that)

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    Quote Originally Posted by GLS View Post
    Looks really nice Josiah!

    I like the gorge, though I don't particularly like the label for it, but then again it may not look right to the side of it. Perhaps if you spread out the gorge a little bit more, as it does look a little isolated, it would fit in a bit better!

    The only other thing is that you've cropped off some of your labels that would normally overlap the edge, which you may want to put back. Otherwise, everything is little pretty darn good I think!
    Thanks GLS! I see what you mean about the gorge, I'll see what I can do. I'll fix those labels!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Josiah VE View Post
    Attention J Edward! I've made a icon for my map, with the very ironic phrase on the scroll "United as One" because my lands are as far as you can get from united as one. They made the saying when the Gondevash Empire was first forming, okay. They thought they could conquer all the lands and keep them under control, they were very wrong.
    Got it. It'll appear on the next map update.

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    Here's a super quick map of a fortress in the Nation of Haschmal.

    Not super great, and in fact pretty bad. I like how I did the fortress, but the terrain is awful, I just did it super quick.. But yeah, better than nothing, serves as a map.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Josiah VE View Post
    Here's a super quick map of a fortress in the Nation of Haschmal.

    Not super great, and in fact pretty bad. I like how I did the fortress, but the terrain is awful, I just did it super quick.. But yeah, better than nothing, serves as a map.

    Castle Camur copy.jpg
    Oddly enough I like the terrain, though I don't think it's well suited to the style of the fortress. The terrain may have been done quickly, but it gives one a good sense of the surrounding in a "sketchy" sort of way. It's just that the two styles you have going on here don't compliment each other.

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    Quote Originally Posted by arsheesh View Post
    Oddly enough I like the terrain, though I don't think it's well suited to the style of the fortress. The terrain may have been done quickly, but it gives one a good sense of the surrounding in a "sketchy" sort of way. It's just that the two styles you have going on here don't compliment each other.

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    Yes, I see what you mean. Maybe I'll try something or just map another city. Thanks!

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    Great job Josiah!! I really like how the plateau divides the territories. The forests and mountains are wonderful, and tons of information.

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