Well done! I liked the small details - Caves in the far west mountains that aren't named, lending a sense of mystery to them. The bridges over rivers. Simple, but important for a traveler who doesn't want to get wet! The use of mountains that lead to hills, and in some places turning into flatter rolling landscape. Lastly, the color version has a nice, aged parchment look. I was going to suggest more color, but that would move it into a more modern look, and it seems to me you are trying to keep the look of an old map, rather than a modern game map.